The First Chapter – Would You Read On?

I was woken up too early and from a sex dream that wasn’t going well. Hunger pangs bled all over the double shot of regret and self-loathing I was cradling; I wanted to throw up, shit, or just make it all stop. To be fair, I didn’t eat well the day before, nor in any time I could remember, but that was just the entree to my misery. I was remembering how it feels to be punched in the soul by some kind of love, for her. Then, twenty hours later, I was alone in a café heading to the airport wearing her shirt, and waiting for the world to fall back into place.

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4 thoughts on “The First Chapter – Would You Read On?”

  1. I am intrigued but would look at the start of your second sentence. It has a great sound to it but the great imagery it has blurs together. I think if you separated them a little bit there may be more fluidity and a bigger punch. Just my nosey opinion . But yes, I would read on.

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